- Pack Story -

Page 2 of 3 Previous  1, 2, 3  Next

View previous topic View next topic Go down

-Pack Story-

Post  Duskfang on Wed Sep 02, 2009 5:31 pm

It sounds great so far, Keep up the good work, although you probably don't need to hear this from me, since you should probably know it.
avatar
Duskfang
Commander

Posts : 1537
Join date : 2009-08-30
Age : 21
Location : In a tiny box somewhere under the sea. Help me.

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Paddie paw on Wed Sep 02, 2009 6:39 pm

How do I put this without sounding to eager?...

Wooooo! Keep it up Sparrow!
xD
avatar
Paddie paw
Commander

Posts : 1211
Join date : 2009-06-10
Location : Watching over the pups

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Blitz on Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:46 am

Good work Sparrow! another awsome chaper!
avatar
Blitz
Commander

Posts : 2614
Join date : 2009-07-30
Age : 24
Location : Wherever the wind takes me

http://mysticacademy.heavenforum.com/

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Duskfang on Thu Sep 03, 2009 8:42 am

Can't wait for next one!
(Please don't forget to include me. If you need any reference, you can read the latest Pack Rolaplay.
Seriously, Dont forget me!)
avatar
Duskfang
Commander

Posts : 1537
Join date : 2009-08-30
Age : 21
Location : In a tiny box somewhere under the sea. Help me.

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Paddie paw on Thu Sep 03, 2009 10:46 pm

Ooooh you have another eager one Sparrow, the pressure is on now xD
avatar
Paddie paw
Commander

Posts : 1211
Join date : 2009-06-10
Location : Watching over the pups

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Sparrow on Fri Sep 04, 2009 1:54 am

Duskfang wrote:Can't wait for next one!
(Please don't forget to include me. If you need any reference, you can read the latest Pack Rolaplay.
Seriously, Dont forget me!)

No worries Duskfang I am/will not forget any one. I am just introducing you guys slowly into the story that's all.

Here's a hint about who the next chapter is focused on!


It will be mainly about Midnight's group. (Paddie, Sunclaw, Blitz and ofcourse Midnight) On what they do after they meet up with the others. (Sparrow, Ralf, Reika, and Shinhan)
Plus one or two more members are going to be introduced in the story! Wink
avatar
Sparrow
Admin

Posts : 2369
Join date : 2009-06-06
Location : In the midst of a storm

http://midnight-freedom.deviantart.com/

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Duskfang on Sun Sep 06, 2009 10:39 am

K, Cant wait for it.
avatar
Duskfang
Commander

Posts : 1537
Join date : 2009-08-30
Age : 21
Location : In a tiny box somewhere under the sea. Help me.

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Ralf on Sat Sep 12, 2009 8:43 am

Cool the story is awesome so far cant wait to read more
avatar
Ralf
Commander

Posts : 2371
Join date : 2009-06-09

http://dogsgonewild.forumotions.net/forum.htm

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Sakura on Sat Sep 12, 2009 9:04 am

Swesome! Like I said, I can't wait xD
avatar
Sakura
Commander

Posts : 1308
Join date : 2009-06-08
Age : 19
Location : peru for some reason idek

http://realmofhope.darkbb.com

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Breeze on Sat Sep 12, 2009 6:30 pm

Good job! I can't wait for more.
avatar
Breeze
Commander

Posts : 148
Join date : 2009-09-12
Age : 21
Location : A Location is a Location and I'm in a Location inside a Location.

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Sparrow on Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:34 pm

A mainly black wolf with silver on his tail walked threw the undergrowth of the forest. He looked back the wolf following him. "Will you hurry up already?"
A sandy white male wolf looked up at him. "Oh shush it Duskfang I'm coming!" The wolf trotted up to him.
"Good cuz you know your really slow Jikins.." Duskfang laughed but stopped suddenly when he heard noise nearby. "Sh.."
Jikins followed Duskfang as they walked closer to the noise. Jikins poked his head threw a bush and was astonished to find four wolves walking by. He took his head out and looked at Duskfang. "Look, we could just join them." He looked back at them for a second then at Duskfang. "They look decent.."

Sparrow lead them on threw the forest. They reached a small pond and decided to take a break. Sparrow laid down under a tree near the water's edge. Ralf got a drink then went off to take a look around the area.
When Ralf was out of sight Shinhan ran and jumped into the pond. Reika looked over at him. "Do you have any sense of self control?"
Shinhan looked up at her from the water. He tilted his head. "Well I might sometimes and might not other times.." He swam around for a bit but got out when he saw Ralf come back, leading two lone wolves towards them.
Sparrow got up and looked at Ralf. "Who are they?.."
Ralf growled then looked at them. "I found them spying on us.."

Duskfang looked at Ralf in shock. "We weren't spying! We just heard some noise and followed it. Nothing wrong in that!"
Ralf rolled his eyes then turned to Sparrow. "What should we do with them?"
Sparrow thought for a minute. "Well.." She said turning towards the two wolves. "What are you doing around here?"
Jikins and Duskfang exchanged glances then Jikins looked at Sparrow. "We're looking for a pack to settle with... and we saw you."
Shinhan tilted his head. "So you were spying.."
Duskfang shook his head then looked at Ralf and Sparrow. "Can we just join your pack?"

Sparrow thought for a few minutes. She sighed then slowly nodded. "Yes, yes you may." Sparrow looked around. "Well um.. lets move on." She lead the pack off.


((( Sorry I didn't talk about the other group but I couldn't think of what to do for this chapter... )))
avatar
Sparrow
Admin

Posts : 2369
Join date : 2009-06-06
Location : In the midst of a storm

http://midnight-freedom.deviantart.com/

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Duskfang on Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:36 pm

WOw, I'm actually serious for once.(nah I'mn usually serius with most people)
Nice job.
avatar
Duskfang
Commander

Posts : 1537
Join date : 2009-08-30
Age : 21
Location : In a tiny box somewhere under the sea. Help me.

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Breeze on Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:37 pm

Nice chapter Sparrow.
avatar
Breeze
Commander

Posts : 148
Join date : 2009-09-12
Age : 21
Location : A Location is a Location and I'm in a Location inside a Location.

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Blitz on Sat Sep 12, 2009 10:38 pm

Good job there sparrow! as always.
avatar
Blitz
Commander

Posts : 2614
Join date : 2009-07-30
Age : 24
Location : Wherever the wind takes me

http://mysticacademy.heavenforum.com/

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Paddie paw on Sun Sep 13, 2009 4:23 am

...

...

...

Wooooooo!!!!

need I say more? =)
avatar
Paddie paw
Commander

Posts : 1211
Join date : 2009-06-10
Location : Watching over the pups

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Sakura on Sun Sep 13, 2009 8:01 am

love it xD
lol when I read 'mainly' I misread it as 'manly' lol then i re-read it xD.


Last edited by Sunclaw on Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:39 am; edited 1 time in total
avatar
Sakura
Commander

Posts : 1308
Join date : 2009-06-08
Age : 19
Location : peru for some reason idek

http://realmofhope.darkbb.com

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Ralf on Thu Sep 17, 2009 5:59 am

awesome story Sparrow Very Happy
avatar
Ralf
Commander

Posts : 2371
Join date : 2009-06-09

http://dogsgonewild.forumotions.net/forum.htm

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Shinhan on Sun Nov 01, 2009 6:21 am

Really late... but nice job ^^
And that's right!! No self control!!
-shoots random puppy with AK-47-

Shinhan
Commander

Posts : 2048
Join date : 2009-06-06
Age : 20
Location : Oregon, US

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Sparrow on Sun Nov 01, 2009 7:41 am

eh, guys.. as you know I haven't been on the site for sometime and the story has been left to just sit here. So I will be redoing the story... Since I have lost my place. I will be starting the new version soon.

_________________
- Catch Me
But your so hypnotising
You've got me laughing while i sing
You've got me smiling in my sleep
And I can see this unravling
Your love is where im falling
But please dont catch me
avatar
Sparrow
Admin

Posts : 2369
Join date : 2009-06-06
Location : In the midst of a storm

http://midnight-freedom.deviantart.com/

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Shinhan on Sun Nov 01, 2009 8:06 am

Ok cool

Shinhan
Commander

Posts : 2048
Join date : 2009-06-06
Age : 20
Location : Oregon, US

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Blitz on Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:10 pm

Sweetness Sparrow Sweetness!(sorta)
avatar
Blitz
Commander

Posts : 2614
Join date : 2009-07-30
Age : 24
Location : Wherever the wind takes me

http://mysticacademy.heavenforum.com/

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Paddie paw on Mon Nov 02, 2009 12:51 am

Woo another story ^^
avatar
Paddie paw
Commander

Posts : 1211
Join date : 2009-06-10
Location : Watching over the pups

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Sakura on Mon Nov 02, 2009 4:13 am

Sparrow wrote:eh, guys.. as you know I haven't been on the site for sometime and the story has been left to just sit here. So I will be redoing the story... Since I have lost my place. I will be starting the new version soon.

You havn't lost your place... At least I don't think so.
avatar
Sakura
Commander

Posts : 1308
Join date : 2009-06-08
Age : 19
Location : peru for some reason idek

http://realmofhope.darkbb.com

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Duskfang on Mon Nov 02, 2009 5:36 am

Nah, I don't think she has, and she COULD always check..
avatar
Duskfang
Commander

Posts : 1537
Join date : 2009-08-30
Age : 21
Location : In a tiny box somewhere under the sea. Help me.

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Domino on Mon Nov 02, 2009 6:16 am

You never know guys. You just never know.
avatar
Domino
Commander

Posts : 488
Join date : 2009-10-27
Age : 23
Location : in atlantis... no seriusly can't you see the fish? oh come on! That's not wright!

http://goldencreekforums.heavenforum.com/index.htm

Back to top Go down

Re: - Pack Story -

Post  Sponsored content


Sponsored content


Back to top Go down

Page 2 of 3 Previous  1, 2, 3  Next

View previous topic View next topic Back to top

- Similar topics

 
Permissions in this forum:
You cannot reply to topics in this forum