Pack Story (version 2)

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Pack Story (version 2)

Post  Sparrow on Fri Nov 06, 2009 3:21 am

((Note: Sorry it's short but all the chapters will be about this size, this way I can get more chapters in without you guys waiting so long for themm ^^))

Chapter 1- Sparrow

As I bushed threw the bushes on a high mountain ledge I looked down upon a vast valley. The valley was mainly forest, with streams, waterfalls, lakes and occasional meadows. The land looked perfect for the pack to claim; although I had no clue as to if anyone had already set claim on it. But at that moment it didn’t really seem important to me. After long months of traveling through the mountain range my pack had finally found a place to live, at least I hoped.
A cold breeze began to blow, taking the golden leaves of the trees with it, making them dance in the air around me. I smiled then looked back at the wolves how had followed me to the ledge, my pack.
A large gray wolf walked up to me, his eyes showed the hunger he was trying to hide. I lifted my head up as he approached and when he was standing a few feet in front of me I calmly looked at him “Yes, Shinhan?”
“Sparrow, do you mind if we go hunt? I’m starving, and this place is loaded with prey… please?” He asked me.
I rolled my eyes. “Shinhan you’re always hungry… but yes I suppose we can all go and hunt.”
“Thanks!” He shouted over his shoulder as he took off down the mountain slope to the bright valley below.
The other pack members followed him, I let them go, knowing of their hunger. Once they were all out of sight I took a different path down the mountain side. Looking up at the hues of leaves, and listening to the crunching sound of them under my paws; but a cold breeze quickly blew again. It reminded me of the fast approaching winter, and of its future harshness.
I followed a deer path down to a small creek bed. After giving a quick glance around I walked carefully across the rocky shore to the water. Lowering my head, I took a drink of the water. Once my thirst was satisfied I walked back up the rocky shore. I lay down under a maple tree and rolled over onto my back to stare up at its golden crimson leaves.
“Yes…” I whispered to myself. “I believe this is where the pack belongs… this shall be our home.”

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Re: Pack Story (version 2)

Post  Vincent on Fri Nov 06, 2009 3:25 am

Sweet story sparrow!
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Post  Paddie paw on Fri Nov 06, 2009 3:25 am

yay nice start Sparrow, very picturesque (hope i spelt that right)
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Re: Pack Story (version 2)

Post  Sparrow on Fri Nov 06, 2009 3:32 am

Glad you guys like it xP I'm almost down with the second chapter as well.

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Re: Pack Story (version 2)

Post  Shinhan on Fri Nov 06, 2009 6:09 am

Always hungry eh? xD
Nice job

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Re: Pack Story (version 2)

Post  Sakura on Fri Nov 06, 2009 10:31 pm

Hah, "Shinhan your always hungry" xD
"...making the trees dance..." <<< thats meh fave part ^^
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Post  Blitz on Sat Nov 07, 2009 1:49 am

Great story sparrow! I have this feeling that it will only get better!
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Re: Pack Story (version 2)

Post  Sparrow on Sat Nov 07, 2009 2:16 am

Thanks guys!
Yes Shinhan in the story your always hungry, which whether you like it or not xP But a lot of things happen while your away looking for food, which helps me get some things into the story etc. Razz

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Post  Duskfang on Sat Nov 07, 2009 5:42 am

Nice story, can't wait for the next chapter!
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