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Re: In the Paws Of Fate ~ Sunclaw's story

Post  Duskfang on Tue Sep 08, 2009 10:23 am

(Tries not to burst into laughter)
That's......sad...that the kid....has....Pfft....no Imagination.......(Laughs uncontrollably)
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Re: In the Paws Of Fate ~ Sunclaw's story

Post  Sakura on Tue Sep 08, 2009 10:26 am

(You just can't resist laughing at me, can ya?)










































































































































lol i still have writers block xD
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Re: In the Paws Of Fate ~ Sunclaw's story

Post  Duskfang on Tue Sep 08, 2009 10:29 am

(Well Seeing as you can probably kill me, yeah I take every opportunity that I can.)
Why is it always writer's block? Cant it be a cone instead?
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Re: In the Paws Of Fate ~ Sunclaw's story

Post  Sakura on Tue Sep 08, 2009 10:33 am

fine, ill put together random scraps of junk from my imagination...

I wake up. Yet again. This time in a puny excuse for a duplacate of the house I was in. (doghouse)
It smells like dog. Not the wild kind, either. The tamed dogs, that do whatever the human wants them to.
Am I dreaming?
Better yet, dead?
I try to move. No such luck.
The collar is on again, this time tighter. I feel the mark it made.
Not good.
The collar is connected (by a leash) to the ground.
Translation: I can't move.
Right now I could really go for some elk. Bull elk.


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Post  Blitz on Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:36 am

wow. Poor sunclaw. I wonder how your gonna get out of this mess.
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Post  Sakura on Wed Sep 09, 2009 11:46 pm

(Sunclaw was in a doghouse, lol didn't know how to explain it xD)

I am asleep. I get woken up bye some... rattling? I wake up and notice yet another hand. It has two bowls.
I can't help but wonder whats inside. My wondering is rewarded when the hand sets the bowls down in front of the 'house' I'm in. I get up and go as far as the leash lets me.
I smell water. And rotten meat. I go for the bowl closest to me and start drinking it.
I stop. This stuff tastes horrible. But its water. I drink all of it and go on to the next bowl.
Big mistake. This stuff is round pellets, not to mention tastes absolutely horrible. Worst than the water. But its food.
After I devour the 'food', I hear the human approach.
"Time to train you."


Chapter 3: An inescapable fortress

I wake up again. This time in a small, dark place. In the metal thing (van); Just what I need. To escape, I mean.
I can't even blink before we stop, I am thrown against the back of the metal thing.
As fast as it started, the back opens and I tumble out. "Get used to it." is all the human said, me sprawled out on the ground. "Well, get up, boy!" it half-shouts to me. I roll my eyes but do as it says. Only because I still have my muzzle on. Thanks for asking.
It drags me to an open area, like a meadow. It throws a circle-thing at me, and it flies over my head. I look at him, my expression saying: "Uh, you expect me to catch that?"
The human sighs and dissapears for a moment, bringing a dog back.
The dog barks at me. I growl.
The human ignores all this and says, "This is Freddie, and he's gunna show you how to catch a frisbee!"
I ignore this and stare the dog in the eye, chalenging it. 'Freddie' whimperes and rolls over. I smile and place my paw on him, glad someone realizes my power. The human, lets call him Bob, pulls me off of Freddie with the leash. "Bad boy." I am hit in the nose. I can taste blood in my mouth.
Bob sighs and throws the frisbee. Freddie quickly gets up and runs after it.
I am not watching. I am not watching. I am not- wow, that Freddie can jump.
It hits me: the human wants me to catch the disc.
Freddie returns with the frisbee and gets a chunk of meat before turning to me.
"Your turn."
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Re: In the Paws Of Fate ~ Sunclaw's story

Post  Paddie paw on Thu Sep 10, 2009 12:49 am

Go Mr Snuggles catch that frisbee xD

Nice story Sun (I have been reading them btw I just keep forgetting to leave comments)
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Post  Sakura on Thu Sep 10, 2009 10:33 pm

Haha thanks, thats how Sunclaw learned to hunt birds xD
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Post  Sakura on Sat Sep 12, 2009 9:22 am

A few months past. I didn't notice. After I realized what 'Bob' wanted me to do, I did it.
And I did it good.
Better that good. Amazing.
After Bob saw how good amazing I was, he brought me to a few compitions. (of course, Bob's girlfriend decided I'd look better with black at the end of my tail, and at the tips of my ears. Grrr.. Anyways, back to the story xD)
I won first place in all of them.
After I made sure every other dog there knew I was boss. And bosses win.
Back to the present. I glance around the room I am today. It is the same room I was in the first day I was here. The human she-pup enters. This she leaves the muzzle on.
"Mr.Snuggles, I have come to apoligize."
I don't know what she means.
She opens the door wider. My escape route.
I run out, the girl right behind. She leads me to the back of the house. There is a hole about the size of me. She takes my muzzle off and pushes me out the hole.
"Go, Mr.Snuggles, go!"
The last time I ever see her, ever, I notice one thing.
Her eyes are leaking.


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Post  Sakura on Mon Sep 14, 2009 10:53 pm

By the time I get back to 'camp' , I realize somethings different.
I trot into my camp and watch the sun fall.
By now, Moontail is supposed to be here.
Something is definitely different, no, somethings wrong.
I howl at the moon, our code for 'Are you coming?' , only at night its for Moon and at day its for me. Usually, though, Moon howls back to say 'Yeah, I'm coming! '
I hear nothing in reply, and a hint of daylight tells me one thing: Moon isn't coming.
I decide to make the most of the remaining darkness and I start to sleep.
When I wake up, I head directly to the cave with the tunnels.

I look around at the entrance of the cave, making sure no one is following. Suddenly I dash inside, being as silent as I could be. I close my eyes, because it is so dark I don't need to see, and I smell my way around the twists and turns of the tunnels until the scent grows strong. I open my eyes and see a male.
"Ray you made it!" I gasp as I take a few steps forward to touch noses with him. "I can't believe it. You've been gone so long."
"I know." Ray replies. Thats when his eyes grow wide. He speaks in a more serious tone. "Did anyone follow you?"
"No, I don't think so." I tell Ray.
"Good, because I have something for ya." Ray says as he drags a basket out from behind him. I look inside it. Inside, there is four of the most cutest pups I have ever seen.
"They are... beautiful." I breath. "I'm happy for you, Ray."
"Good, because I want you to take care of them. Only until they are about six months old. Then I will come back for them." Ray promises as he disappearsinto the darkness of the tunnels. I hapily drag the basket out of the cave, bringing them into my 'camp' . They smell awfully familiar, but I can't quite tell how they are. I shrug off this feeling in the back of my gut and instead start building a nursury for the pups.
That night came, and Moon still hasn't come yet, while I'm working my tail off caring for these pups. Oh, well, I figure she has to show up sometime.
Boy was I wrong.


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Re: In the Paws Of Fate ~ Sunclaw's story

Post  Blitz on Tue Sep 15, 2009 2:36 am

Wow cliffy! I wonder what's coming next.
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Post  Paddie paw on Tue Sep 15, 2009 5:15 am

oooooohh
i'm gripped =)

hehe Mr Snuggles...
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Post  Sakura on Tue Sep 15, 2009 10:40 am

Thanks Blitz, thanks Paddie. Haha I didn't mean to put the cliffhanger there, I just had nothing in my head at the time xD
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Post  Blitz on Tue Sep 15, 2009 7:06 pm

it's ok sunclaw. CLIFFIES ARE AWSOME! why are they awsome? because it makes suspence within the story chapter. xD
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Post  Sakura on Wed Sep 16, 2009 4:01 am

Rolling Eyes lol they are once i think about it xD
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Post  Sakura on Sun Sep 20, 2009 11:30 am

(This will probably be my last part, then I'll put all the parts together in one post xD)

A few months past. In case you were wondering, Moon never came. I smile, like nothings wrong and continue caring for the pups. Then it hits me so hard, its like I get slapped in the face. Of course! It's spelled out on the pups' faces.
Moontail... I shall never see her sorry little face again.
I think, fustrated.
(The song Sunclaw was thinking of (play it during the next part xD): Should've Said No by Taylor Swift
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5pCOghO8qVQ&feature=related)
The next day comes sooner than I expect it. It was a haze. One moment, I'm safe inside my den, silently crying. The next, I'm already going, in a huff, to meet Ray at our secret cave. Oh, he was there alright.
"Hey, what's up?"
" 'What's up' ?!" I spit.
"....?" he doesn't know what I'm talking about for a second. He hesitates. "... I see you've found out."
"Indeed I have. Did it ever cross your mind that you should tell me?"
"..." he hesitates. His hesitation is enough for me.
"So if you wern't planning on telling me, then why did you expect me to take care of your pups?!"
"Well.. erm-"
"Don't go making excuses. I'm tired of this. I'm moving. Away from here, away from you. I'm taking the two oldest pups, leaving the rest with you." I walk out of the cave as fast as I can without trotting, but I don't go fast enough, because next thing I know, I hear him.
"Remember this: I know your secret, Sunclaw! I swear I'll tell every wolf out there, and they'll all know. Every last wolf."
I try not to let my tail puff up, but I forgot about my eyes. They were red. If I ever saw him or Moon again... I shuddered at the thought. Good thing no one will ever find out my secret...
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Re: In the Paws Of Fate ~ Sunclaw's story

Post  Sakura on Sat Oct 10, 2009 8:40 am

Prologue Morninglight's POV

At the time, I didn't know where Shadowpack held their meetings. You see, I'm Windpack's Medicine Wolf. I'm supposed to have dreams, dreams from Starpack. The problem is: I don't. Unless I go to MoonTree, that is. MoonTree is a very special tree (In Shadowpack territory!) that I go to when I need a solution. It goes like this: I go to MoonTree. Starpack helps me. I come back the hero. That's why I'm going to MoonTree right now. So I go south, towards the dried-up river that marks Riverpack's border. When I saw the dried-up river, I took a left, towards the forest that's Shadowpack territory. Then I ran between all the trees, taking the way I always take. As soon as I can scent MoonTree, I slow down to a trot. Before I can even see MoonTree, the reek of Shadowpack overwhelms me. I stopped dead in my tracks and, ears perked forwards, I listened. My heart skipped a beat as the wolves came closer.
"Do you think that, even for a second, that I would even think about letting every loner or rogue we come across into Shadowpack?" A commanding male voice didn't even pause for an answer.
"No. And don't even bother Brokenstar with this. He is too busy to be bothered with this." The voice went on.
By now I could see them. One was a big dark brown striped male with amber eyes.
I noticed one of his ears is split in a deep V shape near the top and a scar on the bridge of his nose.
With him was a sleek dark gray and black striped male with amber eyes.
Tigerclaw stopped right in front of me. "Darkstripe, do you scent anything?"
"No, Tigerclaw. Nothing."
"Okay. Go on without me. I'll catch up."
Darkstripe trotted forward until I couldn't see him anymore. I didn't dare move, since Tigerclaw, I think it was, was standing straight ahead.
"Morninglight, was it? You can come out now." Tigerclaw was staring right at me.
I was shocked he know I was here, even more shocked he knew my name.
"I can recognize your scent anywhere, so just come out, will you?" He continued.
By that point, I know I had nothing to lose, so I cautiously walked forward. I had always thought Tigerclaw was from Thunderpack. But why was he with Shadowpack then? I was about to ask him that when he suddenly said, "Hurry, run before they see you!"
I obediently obeyed and ran as fast as I could.
"Meet me by the border at--" I ran so fast that I didn't hear the rest of his sentence. Something told me he was about to say 'Twilight', so I guess that's when I'll come...




Chapter 1: A fixed fate

I look up at the huge demon dog growling at me. I growl at him and my tail is puffed up to twice its size. My teeth are bared and my eyes are blood red. My snout wrinkles up and I have one thing on my mind: blood. I jump at his through and bite it. I quickly jump on his back and he turns around and tries to bite me. I do as much damage as I can before he gets smart and rolls over, fortunately after I jump off. I nip his ear making it bleed and him yelp in pain. While he is distracted I run around him and bite his tail, hard. He runs as fast as he can until I cant see him anymore. Suddenly I am grabbed by the scruff and shook. "Sunclaw, Father wants you, stupid oaf. Quit playing around." he yells in my ear, dragging me to the pack den. He drops me in front of Father, who is on a throne made of bones. "Here she is, Father" he says before disappearing out the door. Father looks at me with disgust. "Sunclaw, how is it that every time I see you, your covered in blood?" Father's big voice booms, echoing across the cave. He doesn't wait for me to answer. "Why can't you be more like your brother, or even your sister? You know I don't like the scent of blood, so wash yourself off and meet me by the big oak at sunset. I have something very important to do." he continues, jumping down from the bones and walking out the entrance and disappearing. I sigh as I roll my eyes, walking out the entrance and to the creek.

I look at my reflection in the creek. I sigh as I jump in, going underwater before getting swept off into the current. I jump out and shake myself off, breathing heavily. I start running, confused. I run into somewolf, and I quickly take a few steps backwards. "Sorry..." I mumbled, looking away. The wolf I ran into smiles. "Its okay, that happens to everyone. I'm Ray, by the way." I look up, just to see the most handsome wolf I saw in my pup-hood (just to get things straight, this is when Sunclaw was a pup.). He was black with silver paws and tail. I swear he was sparkling in the fading sunlight. My heart melts like warm butter on a hot day. I sigh dreamily and reply, "I'm Sunclaw, and thank you for understanding. I've had a bad day.." I trail off, not knowing what else to say. He nods. "No problem, everywolf has bad days once in a while. So, what are you doing tonight?" Ray says with ease. I can tell he's done this many times before. I'm speechless. With a start I realize the sun is almost totally gone, and I have to get to the Great Oak before Father does. "I have to go, meet you here tomorrow night?" I don't stop for an answer. I zip off towards the Great Oak, which is only the tallest, not to mention biggest tree in this part of the forest.

I literally run into the Great Oak, but luckily I'm early. Or so I think. I quickly recover and look around, to see if I can spot Father. Of course, he is already there, but I don't know that much yet. That is, until he jumps on top of me. "Where have you been? It's past twilight, you should have been here earlier." I think that's all he's stressed out about, so I naturally assume he gets off of me now. But nope. He stays on top of me and stares me in the eyes, challenging me. I accept, and kick him off with my hind legs. I leap up onto my feet and my eyes turn red, my tail already puffed out. We circle each other, me getting ready to brace myself while he gets ready to attack. Of course, as luck would have it, I attack first, surprising him with not only my tactics, but my speed also. I lunge at him and go for his throat, but he rolls over, dodging. I leap at him, my eyes flaming with anger as I go for the killing bite. I stop with my mouth right next to his throat and growl, "Any last words?", knowing exactly what he will say: "Sunclaw, you are hereby kicked from the pack. You must leave the territory immediat-" Father never got the chance to finish, mostly because a moment later my white fur is red with blood and the taste of it stinging my mouth, along with the unmistakable scent of death. I shake my head and can't believe what just happened: I killed my father, the alpha of the pack. I already knew I would be kicked from my pack, but I never knew the power I have. Until now.


Chapter 2: A twisted destiny

Since the alpha died, ehem was murdered, Darkstream immediately stepped up. As I lick the blood off my fur, my sister, Moontail, is lecturing me. Of course, shes not supposed to, but she is. Outside of the pack territory. I sigh as she goes on and on, me not paying attention. Moontail notices. "Sister, did you hear a word I said?" I nod, still daydreaming. I jump up as I realize its almost dusk. I wordlessly run towards the stream, where I saw Ray last. Moontail, being my nosy alter-ego of a sister, follows me. I pretend not to notice, but I know shes watching me talk to Ray. I trot back towards my temporary 'camp' and, half way there, notice Moontail isn't following me. I shrug and continue trotting, at a slower pace, back to 'camp'. She never did show that night, like she usually did. Or the night after.

I wake up with a start. I don't remember ever falling asleep. My ears sting. My nose hurts, and the scent of death is everywhere. I can feel, not to mention hear, my belly grumbling, the pain of not eating for a while hurts. My head is full of fear. I try to stand up, but I hit my head on something. "What the heck is going on?!" I demand, or at least try to. I have a muzzle on, and I'm stuck in an uncomfortable position on the ground, the floor of whatever thing I'm contained in is digging into my side. I try to bark for help but the muzzle prevents me. I also have a thing around my neck (a collar) digging into it. I can feel the red ooze slowly falling, taking its sweet time. I don't know where I am, but I wish I was anywhere but here.
I admit it: I am afraid.

As fast as it started, it ended. Well, the fear and being afraid part of it. A human hand came towards me and I snarl. Big mistake. The hand hits me in the head and what replaces the fear is anger.
The hand grabs me by my already-tight collar and drags me out of my containment area-thingy. I now see all the animals around me, and realize where the smell of death was coming from. Everywhere.
The human drags me into another containment cell, a little bigger than the first, this time in the back of a metal thing (van). It locks the door and slams another door in my face. At least I can stand up now, I say to myself. I've gotten off lucky... this time... Not. The metal thing starts vibrating and it suddenly feels like I'm on a boat. It stops and I am thrown against both of the doors. I try to say, 'let me out' but it comes out like, 'mhm, ahh mhhn' because the muzzle is still on me. The hand opens both doors and picks me by the scruff again. I notice the human takes me inside a big, noisy building. I am thrown on a white table and another human in white comes towards me. With a needle.

I wake up later, this time in a small, dark room. "..Why is that every time I wake up, I can't remember falling asleep and I wake up somewhere else?" I sortof laugh at my lame joke. Here I can stand up, so I do that.
I look around my containment place and realize something: the scent of death is gone. I half-smile. Its better than nothing.
The door opens. A little female walks in, and suddenly the room is bright. I put my ears back as I back away. "Oh, sorry, Mr. Snuggles, I didn't realize they put you in a dark rooom." darkness surrounds me. Its a start.
I hear the girl come closer. She can't see me.
"Mr. Snuggles, come here boy!"
Could she be any louder?
I roll my eyes.
The darkness disappears, replaced by light. I growl. She comes closer and takes off my collar.
"Thats no way to act, Mr. Snuggles."
I snap at her, missing on purpose. Only by millimeters. The girl screeches and goes back out the door, not closing it all the way. I run out and am in a kitchen. I look back and forth to find a way out, one thing on my mind.
Freedom.
That thought disappears when the muzzle snaps back on me and I get thrown back in the room. The hand hits me in the face before disappearing.

I wake up. Yet again. This time in a puny excuse for a duplicate of the house I was in. (doghouse)
It smells like dog. Not the wild kind, either. The tamed dogs, that do whatever the human wants them to.
Am I dreaming?
Better yet, dead?
I try to move. No such luck.
The collar is on again, this time tighter. I feel the mark it made.
Not good.
The collar is connected (by a leash) to the ground.
Translation: I can't move.
Right now I could really go for some elk. Bull elk.

I am asleep. I get woken up bye some... rattling? I wake up and notice yet another hand. It has two bowls.
I can't help but wonder whats inside. My wondering is rewarded when the hand sets the bowls down in front of the 'house' I'm in. I get up and go as far as the leash lets me.
I smell water. And rotten meat. I go for the bowl closest to me and start drinking it.
I stop. This stuff tastes horrible. But its water. I drink all of it and go on to the next bowl.
Big mistake. This stuff is round pellets, not to mention tastes absolutely horrible. Worst than the water. But its food.
After I devour the 'food', I hear the human approach.
"Time to train you."


Chapter 3: An inescapable fortress

I wake up again. This time in a small, dark place. In the metal thing (van); Just what I need. To escape, I mean.
I can't even blink before we stop, I am thrown against the back of the metal thing.
As fast as it started, the back opens and I tumble out. "Get used to it." is all the human said, me sprawled out on the ground. "Well, get up, boy!" it half-shouts to me. I roll my eyes but do as it says. Only because I still have my muzzle on. Thanks for asking.
It drags me to an open area, like a meadow. It throws a circle-thing at me, and it flies over my head. I look at him, my expression saying: "Uh, you expect me to catch that?"
The human sighs and dissapears for a moment, bringing a dog back.
The dog barks at me. I growl.
The human ignores all this and says, "This is Freddie, and he's gunna show you how to catch a frisbee!"
I ignore this and stare the dog in the eye, challenging it. 'Freddie' whimpers and rolls over. I smile and place my paw on him, glad someone realizes my power. The human, lets call him 'Bob', pulls me off of 'Freddie' with the leash. "Bad boy." I am hit in the nose. I can taste blood in my mouth.
'Bob' sighs and throws the frisbee. 'Freddie' quickly gets up and runs after it.
I am not watching. I am not watching. I am not- wow, that 'Freddie' can jump.
It hits me: the human wants me to catch the disc.
'Freddie' returns with the frisbee and gets a chunk of meat before turning to me.
"Your turn."

A few months past. I didn't notice. After I realized what 'Bob' wanted me to do, I did it.
And I did it good.
Better that good. Amazing.
After Bob saw how good amazing I was, he brought me to a few competitions. (of course, Bob's girlfriend decided I'd look better with black at the end of my tail, and at the tips of my ears. Grrr.. Anyways, back to the story xD)
I won first place in all of them.
After I made sure every other dog there knew I was boss. And bosses win.
Back to the present. I glance around the room I am today. It is the same room I was in the first day I was here. The human she-pup enters. This she leaves the muzzle on.
"Mr.Snuggles, I have come to apologize."
I don't know what she means.
She opens the door wider. My escape route.
I run out, the girl right behind. She leads me to the back of the house. There is a hole about the size of me. She takes my muzzle off and pushes me out the hole.
"Go, Mr.Snuggles, go!"
The last time I ever see her, ever, I notice one thing.
Her eyes are leaking.

By the time I get back to 'camp' , I realize somethings different.
I trot into my camp and watch the sun fall.
By now, Moontail is supposed to be here.
Something is definitely different, no, somethings wrong.
I howl at the moon, our code for 'Are you coming?' , only at night its for Moon and at day its for me. Usually, though, Moon howls back to say 'Yeah, I'm coming! '
I hear nothing in reply, and a hint of daylight tells me one thing: Moon isn't coming.
I decide to make the most of the remaining darkness and I start to sleep.
When I wake up, I head directly to the cave with the tunnels.

I look around at the entrance of the cave, making sure no one is following. Suddenly I dash inside, being as silent as I could be. I close my eyes, because it is so dark I don't need to see, and I smell my way around the twists and turns of the tunnels until the scent grows strong. I open my eyes and see a male.
"Ray you made it!" I gasp as I take a few steps forward to touch noses with him. "I can't believe it. You've been gone so long."
"I know." Ray replies. That's when his eyes grow wide. He speaks in a more serious tone. "Did anyone follow you?"
"No, I don't think so." I tell Ray.
"Good, because I have something for ya." Ray says as he drags a basket out from behind him. I look inside it. Inside, there is four of the most cutest pups I have ever seen.
"They are... beautiful." I breath. "I'm happy for you, Ray."
"Good, because I want you to take care of them. Only until they are about six months old. Then I will come back for them." Ray promises as he disappeared into the darkness of the tunnels. I happily drag the basket out of the cave, bringing them into my 'camp' . They smell awfully familiar, but I can't quite tell how they are. I shrug off this feeling in the back of my gut and instead start building a nursery for the pups.
That night came, and Moon still hasn't come yet, while I'm working my tail off caring for these pups. Oh, well, I figure she has to show up sometime.
Boy was I wrong.

A few months past. In case you were wondering, Moon never came. I smile, like nothings wrong and continue caring for the pups. Then it hits me so hard, its like I get slapped in the face. Of course! It's spelled out on the pups' faces.
Moontail... I shall never see her sorry little face again.
I think, frustrated.
(The song Sunclaw was thinking of (play it during the next part xD): Should've Said No by Taylor Swift
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5pCOghO8qVQ&feature=related)
The next day comes sooner than I expect it. It was a haze. One moment, I'm safe inside my den, silently crying. The next, I'm already going, in a huff, to meet Ray at our secret cave. Oh, he was there alright.
"Hey, what's up?"
" 'What's up' ?!" I spit.
"....?" he doesn't know what I'm talking about for a second. He hesitates. "... I see you've found out."
"Indeed I have. Did it ever cross your mind that you should tell me?"
"..." he hesitates. His hesitation is enough for me.
"So if you wern't planning on telling me, then why did you expect me to take care of your pups?!"
"Well.. erm-"
"Don't go making excuses. I'm tired of this. I'm moving. Away from here, away from you. I'm taking the two oldest pups, leaving the rest with you." I walk out of the cave as fast as I can without trotting, but I don't go fast enough, because next thing I know, I hear him.
"Remember this: I know your secret, Sunclaw! I swear I'll tell every wolf out there, and they'll all know. Every last wolf."
I try not to let my tail puff up, but I forgot about my eyes. They were red. If I ever saw him or Moon again... I shuddered at the thought. Good thing no one will ever find out...
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